Mc donald is harmful to the people in new zealand.
(i agree) because it is bad for you and can make you sick if you have to much. It can also hurt your body system and digestive system. It can also make you fat which is bad because your heart need to be exercised or there is a chance you can get a heart attack.
Mcdonald's is also a fast food company and fast food is nomely very bad for you because it is all fat and sugar and when you have to much of it you can get sick. Like you could get diarrhea or you could even get sick and spew up or just get unhealthy.
Mcdonald's is also dangerous because there is so much bad things in it that could make you very sick mostly because of all the fat and sugar but also because they put things in it that people use on weeds or to make plastic contact lenses. This is why i agree that mcdonald's is bad for you. And did you know they put drugs into your beloved mcdonald's
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